The Perfect Dream
Had a dream last night,
No scary ghost, just a fight,
A simple story,
Days of my glory.
I am a king of a big country,
But not so happy
Coz missing in my life,
Is a lovely sweet wife.
Far from my kingdom,
Lives a king,
They say her daughter,
One day,
Would lead to a slaughter.
The night I decided,
That I will fight that king,
Slide in her daughter’s hands,
A beautiful diamond ring.
So next day, my ships are ready,
Guns are blazing,
I start the journey,
Not knowing the ending.
War began, slaughtering began,
I also joined,
Riding on to my horse,
Killing without mercy.
There I saw the girl,
The girl who took over my heart,
Shedding precious tears like rain.
Holing her father’s head,
Asking me to kill her.
A tear rolled down my eyes,
Bending on to my knees,
I ask her to go with me,
But!!
Comes from nowhere a arrow,
Piercing and bonding over bodies into one
We were dying slowly,
But I lived thousand lives,
Seeing into her eyes.

accha hai
qute story with sad end…
what a nice poem… fundooo !!
are..sad endings seem more beautiful…
well…it was quite an touching poem…
it reflects ur desire or passion for someone
-anujjha
thanks..it may be some internal desire…i dunno
Hi all, I m writing this with a knife across my neck.. so, I can’t say anything wrong here.. Still, I wud say that it is a very lovely poem.. typical sandeepan style.. but the ending is different.. I m surprised how cud he thought abt that.. The last 2 lines are simply amazing.. nd the most beautiful.. nd against his own style of writing.. well, keep up buddy.. nd there is no need to use a knife.. this one is really nice, doesn’t need forced praise..
sad ending ! they are more beautiful..
loved it.. quite a start